Decrease description not to sound quite poetic…
The ‘Hot Dog Party’ oil painting’s review is very in-depth. I suggest you decrease the descriptive side of the review because it sounds quite poetic. It’s still a very good one.
Editor's note: This file has an interesting story. Apparently, this guy, Mr. Kotz-Gottlieb ("Gottlieb" meaning 'God-love' in German), has been mass-spamming art websites, guestbooks, e-mails, and newsgroups with his attempt to spread the word of fine art to the masses. And it is with great pleasure that aNAda was sent one of his letters, and it is with even more pleasure for us to post it here today. Yes.